CL love story project
By: Jose Velarde 9E
In 2010 I was just sitting on a bench reading a book. Then suddenly a beautiful girl sat beside me. I was just there reading my book, but for some reason I couldn't concentrate because of the girl beside me cause she is so pretty. So I just kept on reading and then few minutes later I see her grab out a book out of her bag and I saw that we were reading the same book! So I got shocked then I approached her and asked her what chapter she is in. She said chapter 10, I was also in chapter 10 so I introduced myself and we started talking to each other about the book and her interests and she also asked me about my interests.
We had a lot of stuff in common like we both played soccer, liked to listen to music a lot and more! We talked about an hour or half we actually forgot to read our books already cause we were having too much fun talking to each other. After that she told me that she had to go home already, she said bye! But I told her to wait cause she didn't tell me her name yet but she gave me her phone number on a paper and left.
The next day I tried looking for her around the campus. I even texted the number she gave she never replied to me. I just kept on texting her hi and hello per day. But she never replied but I kept on trying to look for her and kept on waiting for a reply. Two weeks had passed by and still no reply. So I went back to the place where we first met and read the same book but this time I was on the last chapter of the book. I actually tried waiting for her there for a week, on the last day of the week I was about to leave the place and then I heard someone call my name. So I looked back and saw the girl that I have been looking for.
I asked her why she wasn't replying to my texts she said that her phone broke and she got it repaired and she apologized. After she told me the reason I asked her what was her name?
She said it is for you to find out and she left, but I chased her and asked her how will I find out. She said try guessing and she gave me a hint that her name starts with an a and ends with an a so I guessed, I said alexa,alexandria,Ana and Alyana she said no to all so I gave up and she gave me another hint the second letter of her name was n. Then she told me that she had to go cause her mom was waiting for her in the car. She promised that she will reply to my texts already. So I was stuck with the letters a, n, and a.
We kept on texting everyday until I guessed what her name was. Then one day I finally guessed her name! Her name was Annika.
She was so happy when I finally guessed her name. We started hanging out and she became my best friend. Then this one day I finally told her that I liked her. And she told me that she liked me back. So we started dating. I dated her for 1 year until I finally decided to ask her if she wants to be my girlfriend. I asked her when we went on a date during Valentine's Day. She said yes, I was soooo happy when I heard her say that three letter word. We were boyfriend and girlfriend for 5 years.
I waited until she really trusted me and when I really got close to her already. I waited for the sixth year anniversary which was on Febuary 14 Valentine's Day, when I asked her to be my girlfriend but on the sixth year I asked her to be my wife. So I went shopping for the ring I was gonna give her. And then it was the day I was gonna ask her already. I was so nervous that she might say no. But it was time I asked her "Annika will you marry me?" My heart beat got faster and faster and faster until she said the three letter word. She said yes! That was the happiest time of my life. We got married 6 months after. She got pregnant 4 months later gave birth 9 months later. We lived happily ever after. THE END.
It was so pretty. I kinda have a true love aura in it. It was really beautiful for love in this magic. Someone put a magic love in it. It turns into a valentines day fanfic.
ReplyDeleteThe story has a very deep meaning. It is a story that everyone should read. I really liked the message. I learned alot from the story. Overall, it is perfect.
ReplyDeleteGSG.H4VICK '14March 17, 2015 at 10:55 PM
ReplyDeleteThis story is a good example because of this. This story shows how true love can really bring people together. This story also shows how two people can really stay together through true love. This story also shows how true commitment through one another can really make your relationship prosper. This story overall shows how you can have a perfect relationship through the guidance of God.
-Bourne Victor, 9C, Yeah
This story is so nice. Chasing her proved how much your character liked her. It's so inspiring. I really like it.
ReplyDeleteThis story is very nice and creative. It's realistic and inspiring. God is really in the story. He is present because you can see how powerful He is in the story. Also, it's relatable. You can see that God's guidance is there. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteIt was creative. It was nice. The story was good. It is inspiring. It's also well written. It is also imaginative
ReplyDeleteJose Manotok 9-C
DeletePul Ona 9-C Nice story here. Good plot outline and mood to it. Appreciated the traditional love story essence of it. Although it did feel rushed. More detail in each parts of life would be great to add. Good intro though, and good delivery. Overall, a nice story.
ReplyDeleteCute story. I love how they met and how he chased after her and them becoming best friends is a great part of the story. It has a nice message and it overall written well. The events these characters were in were spot on and adorable.
ReplyDeleteThe story is really good. It tells us that God is with us, through everything. It's really creative. Different from others I've seen. Would recommend for others.
ReplyDeleteI love the intro to the story on how they met through a book. Could it possibly be fate? Anyways the story was very sweet and easy to understand. Maybe cause it seems sort of like a cheesy love story. But sometimes being cheesy can pay off haha. Anyways this story was excellent and also quite touching. It was cute how she tried to make you guess her name hahaha. Good job Jose!
ReplyDeleteThe story is well written and creative. Love stories have a tendency to be cheesy and cliche, but this was written nicely. The plot flows well. It's easy to understand and is a nice quick read. Good work!
ReplyDeleteKen gomez 9c great story, very meaning ful and well written.
ReplyDeleteThis story was nice. It was inspiring and creative. It shows that God is always with us.
ReplyDeleteAlfonso 9C
The start was already adorable for me. Everything was cute. How you were able to guess he name thru texts and stuff. It was nice how you were able to ask her out after all those years. This was a nice story. -Regina Atienza, 9C
ReplyDeleteThe story has a very good plot and story. The beginning, and the whole story, is very well written. The setting is nice. Everything is very good. CL points were also seen.
ReplyDelete-Andre Domingo 9C
it it nice i like it . people would love this story. it feels like it really happened. people would like this to happen to them as well. congrats i hope you would get a high score.
ReplyDeleteIs it fate? That a book could bring them together? If you love someone you would chase after them.. This story shows that, I like this story because it has a really nice plot.
ReplyDeleteit's a great story, I really really liked it! Sooo cute! If it's meant to be then it will be hehe
ReplyDeleteI liked it it was very nice.
ReplyDeleteIt was very thoughtful and nice!
ReplyDeleteThis story was heartwarming and beautiful and nice. I believe many people should read this story to learn a lot about the beauty of live and love.
ReplyDeletePiper Herrera 9-E
ReplyDeleteThis story was really creative and very nice
The story was cute but it was too short for me and i feel like the story was moving a bit too fast.
ReplyDeleteThis story is soo cuuute!
ReplyDeleteThe story is very cute But I wish you added a little more detail, and I wish thatmyou described her more.
ReplyDeleteThe story was very cute and showed that if you really love someone, you will follow them to the ends of the earth just to be with them, and just so you and the other person can also be happy.
ReplyDeleteI thought this story was like Rumpelstiltskin HAHA it's really cute! Good job! :)
ReplyDeleteLianna Cabigas 9E
The story was nice. The first part was nice but later on, the part wherein he explained his marriage and his married life, it wa sa bit rushing. In my opinion, it was a very cute story. It was nice. Appropriate words were used.
ReplyDeleteHaha I love the story. It is really cute how they met. I loved it!!
ReplyDeleteThe story is really good. It was well written. It was kinda funny
ReplyDeleteAs said in the comments above, this story is creative and cute. This story shows how people fall in love in mysterious ways. This story was well written and it catches the attention of most readers. Nice one Jose!!
ReplyDeleteNina Enriquez - 9E
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I love how his imagination worked. It made me realize that anything can happen as long as you wait. Very cute and nice!
Annika Borromeo
ReplyDeleteThe story was very nice and came from the heart. It was very well written and thoughtful.
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ReplyDeleteI really like this story cause of its simplicity. But seriously this is a good story i like how they met through a book and how she wanted him to guess her name, it was very unique way of how to someone, very rare these days. But this is a really nice story and a imaginative one, highly recommend others to read this.}
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