I am not sure where to begin it all just happened so fast. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. We love life, not because we are used to living but because we are used to loving. It started out with a new seat plan in class I didn’t want to leave my old seatmates since we were all good friends, but then again God said there is a reason for everything so I allowed him to let me meet new people. I was seated behind this lovely girl, she does not talk much she was rather silent although I knew she was kind hearted. Several days went by and we slowly started to get to know each other we started out being cheat mates I know it’s wrong but then I realized we are only allowed to cheat our tests but not our feelings.
I started liking her and I had a feeling she started liking me back too, but we would never confess that we liked each other, that’s why the title is Silent love, for love does not need to spoken but only to be given and felt by one another. And that’s what we did. She is very shy and petite and conservative so I respect her so much for that. We hanged out every lunch break and recess I remember her favorite thing to buy was the roast beef in the canteen always take out because we enjoyed walking around the field. We treated each other like were just special friends, doing small deeds for each other like helping her with her stuff and telling each other jokes. It was full of laughter and sincerity.
After high school we landed in different colleges I went to Ateneo and she went to La Salle, but I learned distance is just distance when there is true love. During the weekends we would meet each other in Makati we’d go on dates and off course I was always the one paying because she’s the girl.. We got married after college for we are both Catholic and God is always here for us, and we wanted God to nourish us with his unending love and compassion for us both. Years went by and we still go to church every Sunday for we pay respect for our religion and our Eucharist for it is something essential for me and for her. Even when were older we would not confess our love for it was silent, we both knew we had it and that we love each other thru God. And that’s what truly matters when you have God watching over us, and each other for Marriage.
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ReplyDeleteThe story is really cute. The story is different from the others it is one of a kind. The story is unique. I really love it. The story is perfect and amazing. -KM 9C
ReplyDeleteThe story really moved me. I liked it because they were sweet to each other. I find it sweet that they still meet each other despite the circumstances. I liked the story.
ReplyDeleteDacanay. 9-C.
Really nice and sweet. It's like embracing rebel love in each other. I mean a silent love is like "trying to speak something but you can't face it". It has the final confession and most of all. Really a good feel.
ReplyDeleteHis story is nice and moving. It is very inspiring and I inderstood the message. He wrote it properly and the execution of the story was good. I learned that love is love. Love can be anything. It does not have to be loud, it can be discrete and secretive. It is a good story and it makes sense and is relatable.
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I really enjoyed the subtle hints as to who the female in question is.
It was very enjoyable to see the "prediction" Angelo Buencamino had about the future of him and this girl of his. It was a nice touch on how he and the female shared and knew of each other's affection for one another yet, they did not say it to each other. And it also shows a good lesson that, love need not be told to one another to be shared. All in all, it was very enjoyable and i thought well of it. Best wishes to you Angelo!
The story was amazing and touching and I learned that marriage is essential in one's life and that we need to respect the holy Eucharist. -Jericho Buerano 9C
ReplyDeletePul ona 9-C Great job Angelo! Liked the essence of the story alot! Gave a really "slice of life feeling" from modern school and a drop of fiction. Good plot succession also. Generalized yet indulgent! Awesome how you made a good plot in a short story. Great lesson here and great plot to follow! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThere are a couple of grammatical errors and it's quite short but it's okay since everything in the story is clear. The story is cute and the girl is described well. It's very much relevant to relationships and it seems quite real. It was portrayed well and written nicely.
ReplyDeleteAnnika Bengzon 9C
Nice story. You could really learn a lot from it. It shows what love is all about. Love can be expressed even without words. Love is everywhere.
ReplyDelete-Gillian Ellar 9C
Great story and mysterious girl in your story. In both of your stories you and Eon, you guys didn't identify the girl. But you described her in a very nice way. This will inspire many young lovers to pick the right person in life. Narrated and said in a simple but sweet way.
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Seems life-based 😉. Good old seatmates we were, sad that we were separated but it was a good thing that you were able to meet the girl you love 😘. Cute how you know what she likes🍛. Amazing how you still were able to communicate despite the fact that you were in different colleges. Nice how you were able to keep a strong relationship after all those years 👌. Regina Atienza, 9C✨
ReplyDeleteI think it's a really good story. Seeing how he said that God was in their connection. The author implies that love can also be silent but known. It's a really good story. Would recommend.
ReplyDeleteThe story is very easy to follow. Despite a few grammatical errors, it's easy to understand. The plot is very cute and sweet. The girl is also portrayed accurately and very well. Good job, Angelo!
ReplyDeleteIt was creative. It was nice. The story was good. It is inspiring. It's also well written. It is also imaginative
ReplyDeleteThe story is very good and well written. The plot is clearly seen. The settings and plot is realistic. The characters is realistic too. Ideas from CL was also seen.
ReplyDeleteThis dudes story made me cry. He's so emotional and senti, and it reminds me alot of me. I hope other people realize that there are many kinds of love such as this being one of them. He spilled his heart out in the best way possible 10/10 Suayan 9C 39
ReplyDeleteKen gomez 9c greeaat story man. It was very meaningful and it was very long as well. 😁😁
ReplyDeleteThis story is great and realistic and simple yet complicated. Nice story.
ReplyDeleteAthena Malantic 9D
ReplyDeleteThe story is so realistic and it's really cute the way how everything was described. This story really taught me that love knows no boundaries, because not even the distance mattered. It's really nice how in everything they do, God is part of it. The way he showed his love for her was really great. Even though it was short, it was good.
Lanz Llobrera 9D
ReplyDeleteThis story hit me right in the feels. It shows that even thought you dont admit your feelings, its about the actions. Then, eventually, when time comes, you would admit your love for each other.
Keith Leonardo 9D This story is interesting. It is realistic and shows what happens in a relationship. This shows the details in a relationship. It also shows stages of a relationship. The plot is meaningful and nice. Good job. :)
ReplyDeleteI really like this story. It is very cute and lovely. I like how it teaches values. It thought me that love is not boasted and said but expressed and shown. It also thought me that with true love you can overcome problems like distance.
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Hannah Ortillo 9D
ReplyDeleteTotes amazing! Cute story super x100. Would totally read it over and over again. Loved it so much. Yay for you Buencamino
The story showed that love will persevere and only youre the only person to feel it. The emotions poured into the story was overwhelming in a way that you would appreciate the things said by it
ReplyDeleteI really really liked the story. It showed me that love is patient and understanding. It also showed me that no matter what gets in the way, love will always come through.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story because it shows a relationship that most teens can relate to. From the setting to the experiences, it was easy to understand. I liked their simple relationship and how he didn't reveal the girl in the story and also how in their marriage, they kept their love for God
ReplyDelete-Sy, Lance 9D
I really really really liked this story because it shows how God's role in marriage/ love is very essential. I also liked this story because it shows the patience one has to have when commiting themselves to someone for the rest of their lives. Lastly, I liked this story because it shows that you should accept whatever problems that may be thrown at you. Because if you pull through in the end, you'll know that the person who was standing with you all that time you were struggling was the one.
ReplyDeleteReyes, Katarina S. 9D
I like the story very unique. like what Yena said it showed GODs role in love life amd married life how he works. how HE makes two people meet . also how HE makes the, fall in love it is a very nice story it can be a movie too.
ReplyDeletethis story has a different way of telling the story. not saying it's bad or something. it is still a very nice story. being very realistic because of the part of being silent. it also shows god's role in love. he plans it to get you fall in love anywhere.
ReplyDeleteThe story was short and simple but also sweet. It's showed that love isn't always about grand gestures but about the little things that reassure you of the way that person feels.
ReplyDeleteWho is the girl you are talking about Angelo? What I can say is that my mouth and eyes were open all throughout the story for it was very interesting. The concept was well thought of. The thought of "Silent Love". That you would show love through actions and not through saying it. Like the saying "action speaks louder than words" it was very captivating. The way you described your future was very realistic and very heart warming. Even if in the start it said that you didnt want to change seats or have new seatmates, it was DESTINY in which God planned. WELL DONE! - James Allas 9F
ReplyDeleteI like this story because it portrays love that is shown through actions. This just shows that actions speak louder than words
ReplyDeleteThis story is well written and I feel like the message to it is even greater, how it doesn't matter how different you are from a person, you are still capable of loving them and experiencing love with them good job angelow
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ReplyDeleteI really like the story because I have no idea if it's real or not. But it is a very creative story and inspiring story. John Green should turn this into a book
ReplyDeleteActions really do speak louder than words than words. Props to you for making it super cute and at the same realistic hehe kakakilig joke lang haha um it was a moving story
ReplyDeleteIt tells me actions speak louder than words.
ReplyDeleteIsabela Acosta:
ReplyDeleteThis story was beautiful. I learned that actions speak louder than words. It was so heart warming and realistic.
The story was really nice and shows that you don't need to say anything to show your love
ReplyDeleteAdorable <3 it goes to show that toward different people we have different feelings and we should find the right one to treat them right. The story explains how to one another we should treat each other in a way we cannot be away from each other. The simple express of love to someone can be the best gift ever :) love is something that makes you change yourself for someone. But in time you must accept that the person should accept you for who YOU are and not how YOU change for THEM.
ReplyDeleteThe story is nice. This is good that God is in the center of your relationship. It is interesting. Nice way to end a story.
ReplyDeleteI love your story. It is super sweet and cute. I like the whole shyness thing cause it is really realistic. I love that you put God in your story. Keep it up!!
ReplyDelete"We love life not because we are used to living but because we are used to loving." I think that is one of the quotes in this story that struck me the most. I believe that the quote just shows what love can do to our lives also how love + life affect each other.
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